Revisions

I like how you talked about your character getting water from the water heaters and how you repeat that "they always forget the water heaters," because I thought it showed that water was a key resource to the character's survival, and that he had to be intelligent enough to remember the water heaters. I also like the idea for the story, because I thought it was different and original because it describes the way he "ransacked the houses." One thing you could add in is how your character looks, because I could picture the empty houses and the sand dunes, but I couldn't clearly picture the character.