Round Four: Robyn Ringler

I like how Robyn Ringler described her incounter with Al Pacino so that it seemed very real to me, like where she wrote "When you saw us striding toward you, your head jerked to the side and your face grimaced as if you were in pain." It also allowed me to feel some of the awkwardness the writer seemed to feel. I also like how she added in a relation to a show that she must have seen, because it gave it more detail. In Dissection I liked how she described the "whooshing noise" and how she talked about things like "line dancing, Girl Scouts, local restaurants" and her daughter, Lily. In Letting Go, I liked how she described what was happening, like when she wrote "the tapping of heels against linoleum." I also like how she said she was a "nurse at the George Washington University Hospital" because it gave you information as to why the writer was at the hospital.
1/12 Speaker =****